Links to Resources Relating to First Controlled Assessment

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Revise the Terms

Language Features Test

Language Features Table

Hi all,

 

Please find a link below, which will take you to the language features table I provided you with.

 

As mentioned, there are a few features missing. However, feel free to open the document, amend it and add the extra features.

 

https://app.box.com/s/5z4f8ck86y3uebbaklnxo2pg7eqw29uq

Beginnings of a Model Response

Compose a passage of writing on an issue that really annoys you…………

As expected, Monday morning has arrived and I am about to experience the monotonous journey of travelling to work. I am certain that I could calculate this in terms of weeks, months and even years. I have been making this ghastly journey for the last three years, eight months, and twenty days. Can you sympathise? It’s ghastly because it smells, it’s slow and it’s sickening. It’s these three things and much more that make this the worst experience of my life.

I cannot tolerate the smell, but I can locate its origin. One person is responsible for it. I name him moley man. He presses himself against the chair and his victims- also known as passengers. He looks at me like a corpse with a dead expression.  

 

 

Answer the Following Questions....

What is my issue?

Are there any language features present?

If you are writing about something that annoys, do you need to include ' what really annoys me is....?'

What genre has this piece of writing become?